Read the revised introduction of an informative essay.
During the Neolithic Revolution, irrigation was introduced, which produced larger crop yields, allowing people to store a surplus of food.
Which best explains why the revision is effective
It includes details and facts.
Read a sentence from the draft of an essay about a historical turning point.
During the Neolithic Revolution, irrigation was introduced, which produced larger crop yields, allowing people to store a surplus of food.
The sentence would most likely be part of
the introduction.
Read the revised conclusion of an informative essay.
The invention of the printing press was a turning point in history. In addition to increasing the availability of books and the spread of new ideas, it also led to significant political change and radical changes to the religion of Europe. This forever altered the course of history.
Which best states why the conclusion is effective?
It summarizes key points and restates facts.
The graphic organizer explains the structure of an informative essay.
The thesis statement should be included in the
introduction.
Read an excerpt from the introduction to an informative essay.
The Neolithic Revolution was an important turning point in history. Instead of moving from place to place to gather enough food to survive, early peoples were able to settle in one place, farm crops on a large scale, and build settlements.
How could a writer most improve the thesis in this introduction?
by explaining the lasting change that occurred
Which describes a purpose of a thesis statement?
It supports a student's point of view on a topic.
After creating an outline for an informative essay, a student should
write the draft.
Read the conclusion to an informative essay.
The invention of the printing press was a turning point in history. In addition to increasing the availability of books and the spread of new ideas, it also led to significant political change and radical changes to the religion of Europe. This forever altered the course of history.
Which phrase best supports the conclusion about the printing press?
"invention of the printing press"
Which is an important part of revising an essay about a turning point?
effective transitions
