When we start writing essay, we have to think about 2 things. 1: You have some valuable ideas to tell your reader More than anything, you want to communicate those ideas to your reader One of the common mistakes inexperienced writers make is filing to move past early stages in the writing process in which they are writing for-or writing to- themselves only. Surely, I have experienced this mistake and I did not realize if I make a mistake. An essay is to tell ideas the reader and to persuade the reader in order to understand the own ideas. So, a writer needs finding essay’s purpose and focus deeply.
After finding purpose and focus, the writer will start free writing.The writer should try jotting down everything that pop into his head about his topic by using brainstorm for at least ten minutes. Next, the writer has to make sentences and paragraph and essay. There are a lot of techniques for free writing, the boomerang, clustering, and cubing.
If the writer can look various a viewpoint about topic, his essay will be wonderful and intelligent essay. After you finding focus and important point, you should discover your audience. The readers do not like be bored. Readers hate confusing and disorder. Readers want to think and learn something.Review your audience’s knowledge of and attitude toward your topic before you begin your first draft.
We have to think not only writing an essay clearly and amusing but also ours ideas or topic. Do not think one side. We need thinking about own desire and readers desire. After I read this chapter, I changed my mind.
I thought that the essay is just to tell my ideas, but it is wrong. The essay is kinds of entertainment for reader. Sample Student Essay I like this essay because? the writer told the reader a lot of details. This essay is narrative. Narrative is story. My first impression of this essay is “What the purpose?What the reader wants to tell us? ” but I read this many times.
Therefore, I could understand and I could realize the writer used technique. When we write narrative essay, we have to think a lot of things, know purpose, present main point clearly, follow a logical time sequence, use sensory details to hold your reader’s interest and use dialogue realistically. These points are natural that we start writing narrative essay. However, it is not easy to write narrative essay with these points. If the writer can control these points, his essay will be wonderful narrative.Boring narratives are often the result of problems with subject matter or poor pacing: therefore, you should keep in mind the following advice.
Choose your subject clearly, limit your scope and do not let your story lag or wander. This sample student essay can attract to the reader’s imagination. There are perfect sequences, vivid details, story both clear and interesting in this essay. My favorite point in this essay is that the writer used a lot of vivid adjectives. For instance, the writer used” Those once-shining eyes were now distorted and swollen into grotesque balls of septic, sightless flesh.
In this way, his essay was used a lot of adjective and was written vivid details. This affect is the reader can image this situation easily and reality. At first, I thought that a narrative essay is easy to write, but I do not think so now. We need a lot of works when we write narrative essays. Salvation This narrative was difficult for me because I do not know about Christian.
My home country, Japan has not specific religion, basically Buddhism, so back ground of religion is difficult to understand. But I can know new thing about Christianity by this essay.This essay shows how religion influences to people. In this essay, I could see Langston is changing mind. This essay is very powerful and the vivid imagery of description makes it very real. This story was definitely a good reading and it’s good to know.
This essay is clearly and good described. I felt that religious is how deeply. I want to know about Jesus. This essay is really impressed. Langston did not really recognize what was going on until later on in his life where he now realizes he will not be killed on the alter by God.I think this experience is really big for him.
At the end when Hughes is in bed crying and his aunt tells his uncle it’s because he came to Jesus, Hughes just could not bear telling her that he lied and deceived all those people about seeing Jesus just so that he could go home because it was too late. My favorite part in this essay is the last paragraph. Hughes did consider using sensory details, dialogue, or imagery to help your readers understand the people, places, and actions in your narrative. I want to write an essay like Salvation.
