Speaker
Scott Russell Sanders
family
grandfather - father - him - children
_______ structures the essay
time
base structure is
time
paragraph 1
time (flashback); father's death, thumb = trigger (scar)
paragraph 2-5
-history of hammer links to father and grandfather-father - working on roof-grandfather - building house following wedding -appearance of hammer
paragraph 6-12
-childhood-learned from father-inherits skills (ways to use tools) and learns lessons (value of hard work)-take pride in work-paragraph 10 - perfectionists (levels, straight angles, continuously looks at work)
paragraph 13
pass down to his own children
paragraph 14-16
knowledge and use from tools (shift)
paragraph 17-23
-gerbil (flashforward)-ex of perfectionism-pride has to end
24-25:
inheritance of tools (shift)
paragraph 26-28
-ends with beginning- opening/ending same (father's death)