Crime Story I Made

My Crime Story Draft ‘Hope hurry up! ’ Shouted my family from their mum and dad’s bedroom. ‘Come on we’re starting our dinner now! ’ Screamed Jane, ‘I’m coming, just cutting this last piece of fabric,’ I exclaimed. ‘Hope Nidon if you don’t get here now I will throw your food away with your designs. ’ I dropped all of my equipment and sprinted briskly downstairs towards my parent’s bedroom.

‘Sorry, I was just design the next big thing in fashion. Hey, don’t you dare tut Usher you will see in 15 years time I will be rich and famous. Isn’t that right mum? ’ ‘Yes, dear now hurry up we’re all starving. I perched myself onto the cushion on the hard concrete floor and started to eat.

After we’d finish eating our food Jane, Crystal and me rushed upstairs to our squashy bedroom before our brothers try and get our stuff (especially my designs. ) ‘Luke, we’re going to see if we can get some vegetables. ’ Mum said from the doorway, Luke was the eldest so he was always in charge when mum and dad left us. Meanwhile, we all go outside and play 40/40 IT.

We had such a great time laughing and playing until... Angie shouted ‘Guy, come quick look mum dad I beat! ’ ‘In English please. Laughed Tyson, We all ran towards our parents getting beaten up, Luke tried to make them stop but they didn’t. When we had finished watching the horrific sight we sprinted to them and there on the ground they laid dead, bruised and bleeding.

‘Right, we are going to stay in the house at all times, look after each other and I will be the leader. ’ Luke said and from then on I had always been a housewife and had never been looked after by a parent. ‘Hello, Miss Nidon you have 2 interviews today, one with Will Smith at 2. 40 and the other with Joe Swash at 6. 00.Also, you have a press conference in 10 minutes.

’ Explains Amanda, ‘Yeah yeah I’m not stupid that’s why I’m the best in the business. ’ I reply marching along to my office. When I open the door my designs are all laid out perfectly around my room in there packages, when I go to sit down I land on a whoopee cushion. Slowly, I rotate around the office looking to see who did this. Then I see a luminous pink Primark plimsoll.

Suddenly, I relies it’s my niece McKenzie, ‘OUT Kenzie now Auntie Hope has a busy schedule and on it, it doesn’t say playtime with McKenzie McKenna does it? I ask her ‘No, Auntie Hope sorry. ’ She replies and she walks out with her head hanging down. I am no softy so I carry on with my work. All of a sudden Amanda calls me via phone and says ‘PRESS CONFRENCE! ’ I do my hair quickly again and power walk to the lift, down the stairs and outside of HoN HQ.

So many questions are thrown at me, but I only answer one and say. ‘HoN will be introducing a new departments Furniture, accessories and books. Thank-you! ’ I bow and do a few posses and run to Cafe Rouge. Inside Cafe Rouge, it’s quiet, warm and smells of sizzling sausages.

Only the sounds of rustling newspapers and knifes and forks being used can be heard. Just what I need right now. I sit down and take of my coat waiting for a waiter or waitress. Finally, a waitress comes I ask for a full English breakfast and orange juice. While, I am waiting a musclly, dark skinned and handsome man wearing a dirty overall keeps gazing at me. I try not to look back but I can’t help it, he smiles at me and I smile back chuckling a little.

I stop and fiddle with my hair and text my friends Jenny and Kelly about him. I get my food and drink eating and drinking it and leave.The next few days I see him again sitting closer and closer to where I sit. This is not occasionally, it is occurring again and again until he speaks to me and I get his number. Then we meet again this time it’s a date and I am really excited.

Everything is going well until… I get a phone call from Angelina Jolie asking for her bright red Jumpsuit. So I have to leave. We keep meeting each other until he asks that one sentence that could change my life forever even though I have everything anybody could ask for money, wealth, fame, fortune and happiness.But one thing is missing and that is L-O-V-E! After he proposed we made marriage plan right away and decided to get married in Paris. On Sunday afternoon, I took a day of work to sort out wedding plans and introduce Jayden Swift to my family and friends.

First, I showed him to Jenny and Kelly. We had a wonderful chat together talking about the future and how we met. ‘I first was attracted to her when I saw her beautiful blue, sapphire eyes, Jet Black hair cut at a even length with a fringe and wearing a sensible suit.Because I grew up in such a rough area like Hope I didn’t know she was famous.

’ ‘Oh, sorry girls I need the toilet,’ says Jayden and then her runs off. Jenny and Kelly grab my arm and pull me towards Kelly’s room. ‘Mrs. Swift you are so stupid! ’ Says Jenny slapping my head, ‘Why him? Yes, he’s attractive but he only wants you for you fame and money! ’ Whispers Kelly, ‘No, you both don’t know what your talking about he loves me and so do I simple. ’ ‘I have had such a bad life up to this day and I’m not going to let you two ruin it for me.

If you don’t like him then don’t come. ’ The faint sound of Here Comes the Bride being played softly on the piano is heard. The doors opened and everybody turned the heads to take a look at the bride (ME! ) I smile a gigantic smile showing that I am extremely happy a warm feeling is buzzing inside me as I get closer to Jay and the Priest. Jay grabs my hand and whispers ‘you look amazing.

’ I whisper back’ you’re not bad yourself. ’ Then the priest begins to ask us the questions and bless us. ‘You may now kiss the bride. Says the priest, but Jayden waits and stares at me so I kiss him.

The after party was great aswel; it was in Le Brudge. At times I tended to sit out of the fun just to have a few moments wishing my parents were here to see their happy daughter. But, I had to move on and show that I appreciated what was going on now. When the after party had finished, Jay was drunk and he said many rude things to me that I thought, why did I marry him? A few days after our honeymoon in Dubai, I went to work and jay decided to sort out the house. ‘Good Morning Mrs.

Swift, you have 6 interviews and 20 meetings and your first meeting is in 2 minutes. ’ Explains Amanda, ‘thank-you and from my after party I brought you some shoulders and a mini box on personalised Thornton’s chocolates. ’ I say giggling like a child and I skipped to my office. Today was going so well until the meetings (not the interviews, I liked talking to Arnold Schwinger, Jessica Alba, Messi, Justin Timberlake, Usain Bolt and another fashion designer.

) The day went pass slowly and on my 5th meeting, I had a mine grain and am sore all over. I had to take 7 pills in total today.Taking into consideration, I had a mine grain I left during my 9th meeting in Tokyo and flew back home. It was around 11:00pm and it was pitch black only chinks of lights were flashing as the bulb was broken. As far as I knew I could have been walking into a wall or off a cliff.

I had never left this late before and didn’t like it. Tentatively, I stare until my eyes hurt only making out a dark silloute which wasn’t there. I keep walking and turn around to see if someone else is there because I have a feeling I am being followed, so I keep turning around and hearing footsteps every time I didn’t.I ignore it and am nearly at my house until I heard a voice whisper ‘why aren’t you mine.

’ Its breath smelt of whisky and I was frightened. ‘Jayden, it’s not funny why would you do that? ’ I cry ‘I am as frightened as a child having a nightmare and wetting the bed. ’ ‘What are you talking about? I’ve been here and cafe rouge all day. ’ ‘Don’t lie or you’ll be out on the streets. ’ I sob, ‘Ok, it wasn’t me but I thought we should go to dinner with my friend Benji, he’ll be here any minute now. ’ He said.

DING DONG DING DONG, the bell rings I go and answer it. ‘HELLO, my beautiful chee chee. Says the man who is apparently Benji and he bows and kisses me on the lips. ‘Hey, don’t kiss me I am married you know. ’ ‘Sorry, you’re just so gorgeous. ’ He chuckles and I go bright red.

Jay walks over to him and they both go of and talk together. After a while, we begin to leave and head for Le Gavroche. Benji and Jay order 4 beers each and Benji orders a peri-peri meal, with a side order of frogs legs and snails and so does Jay. I order a French platter and a cocktail. I feel uncomfortable when Benji asks me about my life up to date, I only tell him about me and Jayden.

When they’d finished it all cost up to ? 1005. 67. The next day I stay at home with a broken leg and a headache, I broke it by fighting with Jayden and tripping over a saucepan while running down the stairs. But, I said to the nurse ‘I fell down the stairs. ’ Today I’ve been thinking I don’t need to work anymore if I’m with Jay, I only worked to keep myself occupied and to prove my brothers wrong.

Now, that I am the 3rd richest woman in the world I AM SAFE! ‘Hey Jay, I’m going to quit my job,’ I say hopping he will say yes, but it goes the other way. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU, DO YOU KNOW THAT WE’LL HAVE TO LIVE ON THE STREETS! ’ He yells, ‘NO WE DON’T, I WILL STILL MAKE DESIGNS AND GET PAID BUT I WON’T GO BACK TO HoN HQ! ’ I scream, ‘WE NEED MONEY, TO SURVIVE AND BE…,’ he goes into a whisper and starts mumbling. ‘Yeah, that’s what I thought you married me and I was always the rich and famous one. ’ ‘No, you weren’t you were poorer than I was before and after your parent’s died. Until, 9 years ago.

’ He laughs, I wobble and feel dizzy, I shut my eyes and open it jay gets blurry and then it goes black.I wake up the next day feeling very numb, I am laid in the spare room and have a blank and my snuggie over me. A glass of water is beside my bed and a homemade cookie which say sorry drawn with chocolate icing. I giggle and giggle until I got hiccups, ‘morning sweetcakesorrychocolatebaker. ’ I say hiccupping between each word, ‘I’m sweetcakesorrychocolatebaker? I am sorry about what happened yesterday I Just wanted us to be…’ and he fades off again, ‘its ok I forgave you yesterday when I passed out. ’ ‘Your sister Jane has invited us to her come dine with me dinner and asked if we could come.

He said excitedly, ‘O-K L-E-T-S G-O! ’ so, I jump out of bed, have a shower and watch TV and make designs until its 6. 00pm. Jay rings the bell vigorously like a little child begging for a toy. ‘ALRIGHT WERE IN, god sake, SUCH A EAGER BEAVER! ’ Shouts a voice which sounds like a male’s voice. The door opens and standing in front of me is Jane’s husband Harry Dotter, ‘good- evening Harry Potter I need to see Dumbledore.

’ I say bowing and Harry laughs sarcastically. Jayden and I walk hand in hand toward Jane and her kids. ‘Ah, so nice to see you Mr. nd Mrs. Swift.

’ We sit down and talk until the rest of my lazy family arrives. Then we all tuck in and make remarks and jokes, it reminds me of the old times but not as enjoyable. Especially with the children around, (new generations. ) ‘You are one of the luckiest men around to have little Hope as your wife, she has always been loved by other men and boys.

Once John Elderly asked her out and she said I rather go out with a pig than you. ’ Luke remarks and everyone laughs, until the power cut… ‘Oh darn the lights are out again this street is so rubbish. Mumbles Harry, ‘Jay hold my hand. ’ I cry ‘ok. ’ He whispers faintly. We wait 5 minutes eating our food in the dark and hoping that harry will hurry up.

When the lights come on, we all jump and cheer. I kiss Jay and then relies we should separate our hands. I ask him questions and he doesn’t answer I turn to look at him and then I see a sliver, gleaming blade plunged into his heart imprinted he wasn’t worthy and a puddle of blood beneath my feet. (www. toptable. co.

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